Namo namo Matha
Mother Lanka - we salute thee,
But the saltute is lately only military
Plenteous in prosperity, thou,
Plenty also the terror that seems to grow
Beauteous in grace and love,
Find everything that youre dreaming of
Laden with corn and luscious fruit
Meals nutritious and tasty, like they should
And fragrant flowers of radiant hue,
Of the wars horros nature gives us no clue
Giver of life and all good things,
And of all the struggles human life brings
Our land of joy and victory,
It still maintains some kind of colonial glory
Receive our grateful praise sublime,
For our country seems to be in its prime
Lanka, we worship thee.
Thou gavest us knowledge and truth,
But forgotten is the barely functioning truce
Thou art our strength and inward faith,
Ruined is our childrens once promising fate
Our light, divine and sentient being,
Living in paradise is such a marvellous thing
Breath of life and liberation,
Four different religions in perfect integration
Grant us, bondage free, inspiration,
For a brighter future people turn to emigration
Inspire us for ever,
Peace, well find it not sooner, not later, never
In wisdom and strength renewed,
The charms of Asian beauty can be viewed
Ill-will, hatred, strife all ended,
But these days they are stubbornly defended
In love enfolded, a mighty nation
Prepares with bomb blasts its own cremation
Marching onward, all as one,
Many a good deed is admittedly still done
Lead us, Mother, to fullest freedom,
Hopefully fighting will one day be overcome
sorry, but makes me feel glad that you're reading and reviewing - and liking!
definitely looking forward to reading more feedback by you.
I also like that you use slant rhymes instead of trying to force things. My particular favourite line is
Grant us, bondage free, inspiration,
For a brighter future people turn to emigration
Nice poem.